jumping forward
May. 4th, 2009 10:41 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
luna_rainbowI have an anatomy exam tomorrow (not counted, fortunately) so predictably here I am, being my most productive writing =D
Or actually, I've just been reading what I've written before my life got taken over by work in April.
I wrote about 8 pages a month or so ago that took place in Averron. Since I don't think this really spoils it for anyone, it was when Mordan finally reveals who he is and the relationships between Anwu-ji/Mordan/Vivant gets settled. The Averron arc is meant to be short (as I said before), probably three or five chapters at maximum (hopefully). It really is a "clearing things up" + intermission. Apart from figuring things out with the Chuulinese, Vivant also clears up some matters with the Heshyani, although at the moment I don't think he does that in person. He also visits the legendary (LOL...) Great Library at Averron, where he learns a little about what he hoped to learn and a lot about what he hadn't hoped to learn (kinda like what happens when one bums on Wikipedia). There he will also meet a prophet, of a different kind to Nara, whose words will lead to Vivant deciding to say goodbye to someone. Which is a good thing, because otherwise that someone will probably be amongst the body count! ^_~
I only ended up writing the bit involving Mordan and Anwu-ji, and not even the whole of that. The rest is hard to set down in ink (or at least, bytes and pixels) until I've figured out what happens in-between. I do know what happens in-between, just not the fine details, which I shall need for maximum...impact =D
So anyway, I've gone back and read what I've written. It is depressing =D
Well, it's not depressing in the sense it makes you want to cry, but still. It's depressing.
I guess it is depressing because of the way Vivant acts. I mean, okay, he's not being an emotional wreck or an annoying jerk or anything.
But I actually like the Vivant he becomes...who is much closer to the original Vivant I remember. None of this pleasant, cheerful, imperturbable niceties~! Bring on the sarcasm, yeah~!!!! (You just miss writing vitriol, don't you...)
Well okay, he actually didn't get that sarcastic in those 8 pages. I really want him to verbally flail someone =w=
Oh well, plenty of chance for him to do that in Isshaten =D
Or actually, I've just been reading what I've written before my life got taken over by work in April.
I wrote about 8 pages a month or so ago that took place in Averron. Since I don't think this really spoils it for anyone, it was when Mordan finally reveals who he is and the relationships between Anwu-ji/Mordan/Vivant gets settled. The Averron arc is meant to be short (as I said before), probably three or five chapters at maximum (hopefully). It really is a "clearing things up" + intermission. Apart from figuring things out with the Chuulinese, Vivant also clears up some matters with the Heshyani, although at the moment I don't think he does that in person. He also visits the legendary (LOL...) Great Library at Averron, where he learns a little about what he hoped to learn and a lot about what he hadn't hoped to learn (kinda like what happens when one bums on Wikipedia). There he will also meet a prophet, of a different kind to Nara, whose words will lead to Vivant deciding to say goodbye to someone. Which is a good thing, because otherwise that someone will probably be amongst the body count! ^_~
I only ended up writing the bit involving Mordan and Anwu-ji, and not even the whole of that. The rest is hard to set down in ink (or at least, bytes and pixels) until I've figured out what happens in-between. I do know what happens in-between, just not the fine details, which I shall need for maximum...impact =D
So anyway, I've gone back and read what I've written. It is depressing =D
Well, it's not depressing in the sense it makes you want to cry, but still. It's depressing.
I guess it is depressing because of the way Vivant acts. I mean, okay, he's not being an emotional wreck or an annoying jerk or anything.
But I actually like the Vivant he becomes...who is much closer to the original Vivant I remember. None of this pleasant, cheerful, imperturbable niceties~! Bring on the sarcasm, yeah~!!!! (You just miss writing vitriol, don't you...)
Well okay, he actually didn't get that sarcastic in those 8 pages. I really want him to verbally flail someone =w=
Oh well, plenty of chance for him to do that in Isshaten =D